evaluation final question 7

script: Looking back at your preliminary task what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product? I feel I have learnt many things from my preliminary task and believe that I have been able to improve my work by realising mistakes and weaknesses and working on them. For example my colour scheme of black white and red on my preliminary work wasn't very effective and didn't stand out . I improved my front page after realising the layout wasn't as good as it could be, after researching other hip hop magazines I decided to make the headings of this weeks magazine go down both sides, this gives it a nice hip hop finish as it is used by many other music magazines for example vibe adding to the conventions of real media products. From my preliminary contents page I realised that I needed another picture as the one I had in my preliminary made it look very empty, by taking another picture with 4 artists instead of 2 I was able to solve my problem. I stuck with the headings and fonts as I liked the way they were presented and they were simple to read and use. The layout and background on my preliminary double page made it hard to read, I managed to progress my work by putting my interview with Benz into collumns instantley making the layout better. I also added grey blocks that were slightly transparent behind the font but in front of the background this made it very easy to read solving my issues I had with the font colour and background without having to change either of them,  I have massively developed my skills in program-some being Photoshop, Blogger, Scribd and Prezzi. When I first started to work on my preliminary task my knowledge and experience of Photoshop and other programs were at a very low standard and I was very limited with the effects I could use. I struggled to cut out photographs and didnt know how to add effects to my work. I am now much quicker at using these programs and can now use Photoshop to my advantage using special effects, shortcuts and can now go in to much more depth when creating my media product. I learnt these skills while I was working on my preliminary and allowed me to produce a high standard final media product. My research has also allowed me to improve my knowledge of hip hop magazines, I have learnt this while analysising layouts and other techniques used by these magazines. Because of my research on these other magazines my skills have also been improved, using layouts as an example I have managed to research different forms of layouts choose one best suited to my magazine for example the rule of thirds and use it on my final piece.

final double spread

retake picture double spread, a photo by emmerson! on Flickr.

final contents

retake contents, a photo by emmerson! on Flickr.

final front page

retake picture front page, a photo by emmerson! on Flickr.

Draft pictures

Here is just 12 off the 50 other photographs i took. 

changes to my draft work for my final work

After recieving feedback on my draft work, i decided to completley change the layout of my contents and double page spread. I have decided to make these changes to the contents page becuase the picture used wasnt good or strong enough for what i really was aiming for. Also the fonts and layout i used isnt big enough and it doesnt stand out enough, where as if i use two pictures on the contents page, a large one and a smaller one, this will show the target audience what they will be reading about and whos featured in this months edition. By using stronger fonts and images together well with a new layout I am hopinig for my contents page to look a lot better as well as stand out to the readers. I have found and uploaded examples of current contents pages i wish to use simular layouts too. My double page spread i am happy to use the same image and some of the fonts i have used in this as i believe they are strong and are effective. I also like the colours. I am going to change the layout and change the 'interview' into an 'article' making it easier to read and better overall. I am also going to flip the image of BENZ to the right and have all the font down one side and make it stand out and easy to read by using simular grey boxes i used in my draft work.

contents and double page spread

I really like the simplicity of these two contents pages, they are both really simular and i believe i would be able to use the templates of them very effectivley and it would most definatly work well with my genre and magazine.

The font on this page is very good, i like the use of the image it looks very effective and once again it would suit my genre. I am going to use an article on my artist, like this double page spread, and use a little section in the bottom left or right corner using this as a template.